[evergreen-outreach] beta 4

[Deborah Luchenbill]

Lookin' good!  I have a few text corrections:
-on page 3, in the paragraph about 3.4, I think it would read better if the
sentence " OPAC Carousels went from add-on and became fully integrated into
the Evergreen codebase..." used "to" instead of "and"
-on page 5, the section about the 2019 conference, the word "premise"
should be "premises"
-on page 8, the "Forest Growth" section, in the first line, I'm unclear
what "Evergreen's" is supposed to mean.  Is it a plural? (In which case,
lose the apostrophe.) Is it possessive and missing a word after it, like
consortiums, adoption, progress, or something?

That's it, I think!  Also, I love that Rosie on page 6 is wearing an
Evergreen button.  :-D

Debbie

Debbie Luchenbill
Evergreen Coordinator
MOBIUS
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Columbia, MO  65203
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On Tue, Mar 3, 2020 at 12:17 PM <rogan.hamby at gmail.com> wrote:

> Releases and Features is a bit cleaner I think.  The loading screenshot is
> removed but it allows me to stack the larger screenshots in a column.
>
> The descriptive text on Hack-A-Way has been shortened and made a bit
> larger.
>
> Credits filled out a bit more.
>
> Text adjusted under spotlight to be more central on 2019 Spotlight
> Contributors page.
>
>
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