<div dir="ltr">I will have a slice of time between now and 2 (I'm on a migration call right now) so I'm going to try to get a new doc out with feedback by 2 before my next pumpkin coach appears to take me away for a bit.</div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Wed, Apr 11, 2018 at 11:30 AM, Ruth Frasur <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:director@hagerstownlibrary.org" target="_blank">director@hagerstownlibrary.org</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr">I've been proofreading and then reading comments. It seems y'all have the same eyes (better) than I. Rogan, will there be another version to look at with the updates at a point? I know you're busy and understand if this is it.</div><div class="gmail_extra"><div><div class="h5"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Wed, Apr 11, 2018 at 11:22 AM, Andrea Buntz Neiman <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:abneiman@equinoxinitiative.org" target="_blank">abneiman@equinoxinitiative.<wbr>org</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr">Comments for version 2 attached. Some are pretty picky, and others are more in the realm of style suggestions.<div><br></div><div>Great work overall on this! It looks really professional & visually interesting.</div><div><br></div><div>ABN<br><div class="gmail_chip gmail_drive_chip" style="width:396px;height:18px;max-height:18px;background-color:#f5f5f5;padding:5px;color:#222;font-family:arial;font-style:normal;font-weight:bold;font-size:13px;border:1px solid #ddd;line-height:1"><a href="https://docs.google.com/a/equinoxinitiative.org/document/d/1zWu-J9B1ctcRW_SxNAJqi4jsIevFSgf4Q0jhLFS2lXo/edit?usp=drive_web" style="display:inline-block;overflow:hidden;text-overflow:ellipsis;white-space:nowrap;text-decoration:none;padding:1px 0px;border:none;width:100%" target="_blank"><img style="vertical-align:bottom;border:none" src="https://drive-thirdparty.googleusercontent.com/16/type/application/vnd.google-apps.document"> <span dir="ltr" style="color:#15c;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:bottom">EG Annual Rept -- proofreading</span></a></div></div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><div><div class="m_-316800115556381497h5"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Wed, Apr 11, 2018 at 11:19 AM, Rogan Hamby <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:rogan.hamby@gmail.com" target="_blank">rogan.hamby@gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr">Ah, I read Ben's email but forgot to integrate that. Thanks for the catch Galen! I'll work on integrating these along with any other comments (I've gotten a few off list as well) later this afternoon. Keep it coming! Many eyes only make things better.</div><div class="m_-316800115556381497m_2708762658021060867HOEnZb"><div class="m_-316800115556381497m_2708762658021060867h5"><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Wed, Apr 11, 2018 at 11:11 AM, Galen Charlton <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:gmc@equinoxinitiative.org" target="_blank">gmc@equinoxinitiative.org</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">Hi,<br>
<br>
Thanks for your ongoing work on this! I've added feedback on the<br>
second PDF to my document:<br>
<br>
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oA7q9S14E1Q57_FMGD0HcZu-SWsRMoXJ0aRkDHYa_H4/edit#" rel="noreferrer" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/docume<wbr>nt/d/1oA7q9S14E1Q57_FMGD0HcZu-<wbr>SWsRMoXJ0aRkDHYa_H4/edit#</a><br>
<br>
Regards,<br>
<br>
Galen<br>
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On Tue, Apr 10, 2018 at 10:42 PM, Rogan Hamby <<a href="mailto:rogan.hamby@gmail.com" target="_blank">rogan.hamby@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br>
> Thanks Galen! One thing I've noticed is that as Kathy and I have both<br>
> worked on the document that her system has changed fonts and when doing so<br>
> sizes and styles change also. Well, rather Kathy and I have both noticed<br>
> it. However, the effect has been more dramatic than I realized at first.<br>
> Galen correctly guessed this in one of his comments and it's the cause of<br>
> several others. So, things like text boxes that made sense when I last<br>
> looked at them now are nonsensical and cut off in the middle! It also<br>
> caused things like the Evergreen logo to suddenly overlap text where it<br>
> didn't before. It has also affected things like line spacing. This<br>
> behavior on Scribus's part is concerning and it means I need to go back over<br>
> every page for consistency. I have appointments tomorrow and I want more<br>
> eyes on this so I'm going to go ahead and work in Galen's feedback and put<br>
> out a new PDF (to be attached to this email).<br>
><br>
> Galen noted several places where colors were too close and edges were too<br>
> close. Some of those I had noticed or was on the fence about but was<br>
> waiting for major layout to be done to address so please continue to send<br>
> feedback about those sorts of things. Little things like that can make a<br>
> big difference in final presentation and I've stared at this enough that<br>
> fresh eyes can catch things I miss or help make the decision easier one way<br>
> or the other. With that said I do see things now in the PDF view that<br>
> aren't obvious in the layout software so I'm making tweaks as I see things<br>
> too.<br>
><br>
> I'll be away from my computer a fair bit tomorrow with appointments but at<br>
> some point in the next 24 hours I'll sit down and do another pass looking at<br>
> text issues as well as a my first review of things like spacing between<br>
> frames based on the PDF view. This is definitely something for a<br>
> post-report analysis of how this experiment went.<br>
><br>
> Proofing copy 02 is attached.<br>
><br>
> On Tue, Apr 10, 2018 at 7:24 PM, Galen Charlton <<a href="mailto:gmc@equinoxinitiative.org" target="_blank">gmc@equinoxinitiative.org</a>><br>
> wrote:<br>
>><br>
>> Hi Rogan,<br>
>><br>
>> Here are my proofreading notes:<br>
>><br>
>><br>
>> <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oA7q9S14E1Q57_FMGD0HcZu-SWsRMoXJ0aRkDHYa_H4/edit?usp=sharing" rel="noreferrer" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/docume<wbr>nt/d/1oA7q9S14E1Q57_FMGD0HcZu-<wbr>SWsRMoXJ0aRkDHYa_H4/edit?usp=s<wbr>haring</a><br>
>><br>
>> Regards,<br>
>><br>
>> Galen<br>
>><br>
>> On Tue, Apr 10, 2018 at 5:55 PM, Rogan Hamby <<a href="mailto:rogan.hamby@gmail.com" target="_blank">rogan.hamby@gmail.com</a>><br>
>> wrote:<br>
>> > It's here!<br>
>> ><br>
>> ><br>
>> > <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/lt8fkzjzgxiy1ng/Evergreen%20Annual%20Report%202017%20proofing%20copy%2001.pdf?dl=0" rel="noreferrer" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/lt8f<wbr>kzjzgxiy1ng/Evergreen%20Annual<wbr>%20Report%202017%20proofing%20<wbr>copy%2001.pdf?dl=0</a><br>
>> ><br>
>> > Here is the first of the copies for proof reading. Please note that it<br>
>> > has<br>
>> > only received the most superficial proofreading at this point as the<br>
>> > focus<br>
>> > has been on getting the major layout and content in place. So, please,<br>
>> > beat<br>
>> > it up. As we get feedback I'll add names of proofreaders to the credits<br>
>> > page. Also, if anyone knows the name of the logo designer for the 2017<br>
>> > conference logo I'd like to add it. I assume it was done as work for<br>
>> > hire<br>
>> > and all that but I still think it's good to acknowledge where we can.<br>
>> ><br>
>> > I didn't add a CC license since we didn't gather those permissions from<br>
>> > each<br>
>> > contributor (and some it might be hard to explain it to) but I did add a<br>
>> > statement on the back expressly giving permission to duplicate and<br>
>> > redistribute the report since everyone agreed to that by contributing<br>
>> > content.<br>
>> ><br>
>> > At this point some graphics and layout tweaks are still likely to happen<br>
>> > but<br>
>> > not major ones.<br>
>> ><br>
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