<div dir="ltr">Hi Kathy,<div><br></div><div>Thanks. I will integrate those later. </div><div><br></div><div>For everyone, </div><div><br></div><div>I got some comments just a little bit ago based on copy 1 so please use copy 2. Also, please use Galen's comments as a good example of useful feedback. Noting specific textual locations for issues is really helpful. Also, if a section of text is awkward please point that out and usually saying that it's awkward or unclear or whatever is fine. If it's just a few words long and you feel there's a specific rephrasing or substitution that's great but longer sections may not get replaced with your phrasing as we have to consider space, kerneling, etc... </div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Wed, Apr 11, 2018 at 8:27 AM, Kathy Lussier <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:klussier@masslnc.org" target="_blank">klussier@masslnc.org</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">
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<p>Hi Rogan,</p>
<p>I was going to make these additions myself, but given this last
email, I think it's best if I keep my hands off the document.
There are a few content contributors who should be added to the
credits: Garry Collum (2017 conference article), Jane Sandberg
(documentation update), Ben Shum (RTL sidebar).</p>
<p>Kathy<br>
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<div class="m_-5222509997474652579moz-cite-prefix">On 04/10/2018 10:42 PM, Rogan Hamby
wrote:<br>
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<div dir="ltr">Thanks Galen! One thing I've noticed is that as
Kathy and I have both worked on the document that her system has
changed fonts and when doing so sizes and styles change also.
Well, rather Kathy and I have both noticed it. However, the
effect has been more dramatic than I realized at first. Galen
correctly guessed this in one of his comments and it's the cause
of several others. So, things like text boxes that made sense
when I last looked at them now are nonsensical and cut off in
the middle! It also caused things like the Evergreen logo to
suddenly overlap text where it didn't before. It has also
affected things like line spacing. This behavior on Scribus's
part is concerning and it means I need to go back over every
page for consistency. I have appointments tomorrow and I want
more eyes on this so I'm going to go ahead and work in Galen's
feedback and put out a new PDF (to be attached to this email).
<div><br>
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<div>Galen noted several places where colors were too close and
edges were too close. Some of those I had noticed or was on
the fence about but was waiting for major layout to be done to
address so please continue to send feedback about those sorts
of things. Little things like that can make a big difference
in final presentation and I've stared at this enough that
fresh eyes can catch things I miss or help make the decision
easier one way or the other. With that said I do see things
now in the PDF view that aren't obvious in the layout software
so I'm making tweaks as I see things too.</div>
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<div>I'll be away from my computer a fair bit tomorrow with
appointments but at some point in the next 24 hours I'll sit
down and do another pass looking at text issues as well as a
my first review of things like spacing between frames based on
the PDF view. This is definitely something for a post-report
analysis of how this experiment went. </div>
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<div>Proofing copy 02 is attached.</div>
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<div class="gmail_quote">On Tue, Apr 10, 2018 at 7:24 PM, Galen
Charlton <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:gmc@equinoxinitiative.org" target="_blank">gmc@equinoxinitiative.org</a>></span>
wrote:<br>
<blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">Hi Rogan,<br>
<br>
Here are my proofreading notes:<br>
<br>
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oA7q9S14E1Q57_FMGD0HcZu-SWsRMoXJ0aRkDHYa_H4/edit?usp=sharing" rel="noreferrer" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/docume<wbr>nt/d/1oA7q9S14E1Q57_FMGD0HcZu-<wbr>SWsRMoXJ0aRkDHYa_H4/edit?usp=<wbr>sharing</a><br>
<br>
Regards,<br>
<br>
Galen<br>
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On Tue, Apr 10, 2018 at 5:55 PM, Rogan Hamby <<a href="mailto:rogan.hamby@gmail.com" target="_blank">rogan.hamby@gmail.com</a>>
wrote:<br>
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<div class="m_-5222509997474652579h5">> It's here!<br>
><br>
> <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/lt8fkzjzgxiy1ng/Evergreen%20Annual%20Report%202017%20proofing%20copy%2001.pdf?dl=0" rel="noreferrer" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/lt8f<wbr>kzjzgxiy1ng/Evergreen%20Annual<wbr>%20Report%202017%20proofing%<wbr>20copy%2001.pdf?dl=0</a><br>
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> Here is the first of the copies for proof reading.
Please note that it has<br>
> only received the most superficial proofreading at
this point as the focus<br>
> has been on getting the major layout and content in
place. So, please, beat<br>
> it up. As we get feedback I'll add names of
proofreaders to the credits<br>
> page. Also, if anyone knows the name of the logo
designer for the 2017<br>
> conference logo I'd like to add it. I assume it
was done as work for hire<br>
> and all that but I still think it's good to
acknowledge where we can.<br>
><br>
> I didn't add a CC license since we didn't gather
those permissions from each<br>
> contributor (and some it might be hard to explain
it to) but I did add a<br>
> statement on the back expressly giving permission
to duplicate and<br>
> redistribute the report since everyone agreed to
that by contributing<br>
> content.<br>
><br>
> At this point some graphics and layout tweaks are
still likely to happen but<br>
> not major ones.<br>
><br>
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