<div dir="ltr">Ah, I read Ben's email but forgot to integrate that. Thanks for the catch Galen! I'll work on integrating these along with any other comments (I've gotten a few off list as well) later this afternoon. Keep it coming! Many eyes only make things better.</div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Wed, Apr 11, 2018 at 11:11 AM, Galen Charlton <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:gmc@equinoxinitiative.org" target="_blank">gmc@equinoxinitiative.org</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">Hi,<br>
<br>
Thanks for your ongoing work on this! I've added feedback on the<br>
second PDF to my document:<br>
<br>
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oA7q9S14E1Q57_FMGD0HcZu-SWsRMoXJ0aRkDHYa_H4/edit#" rel="noreferrer" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/<wbr>document/d/1oA7q9S14E1Q57_<wbr>FMGD0HcZu-SWsRMoXJ0aRkDHYa_H4/<wbr>edit#</a><br>
<br>
Regards,<br>
<br>
Galen<br>
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On Tue, Apr 10, 2018 at 10:42 PM, Rogan Hamby <<a href="mailto:rogan.hamby@gmail.com">rogan.hamby@gmail.com</a>> wrote:<br>
> Thanks Galen! One thing I've noticed is that as Kathy and I have both<br>
> worked on the document that her system has changed fonts and when doing so<br>
> sizes and styles change also. Well, rather Kathy and I have both noticed<br>
> it. However, the effect has been more dramatic than I realized at first.<br>
> Galen correctly guessed this in one of his comments and it's the cause of<br>
> several others. So, things like text boxes that made sense when I last<br>
> looked at them now are nonsensical and cut off in the middle! It also<br>
> caused things like the Evergreen logo to suddenly overlap text where it<br>
> didn't before. It has also affected things like line spacing. This<br>
> behavior on Scribus's part is concerning and it means I need to go back over<br>
> every page for consistency. I have appointments tomorrow and I want more<br>
> eyes on this so I'm going to go ahead and work in Galen's feedback and put<br>
> out a new PDF (to be attached to this email).<br>
><br>
> Galen noted several places where colors were too close and edges were too<br>
> close. Some of those I had noticed or was on the fence about but was<br>
> waiting for major layout to be done to address so please continue to send<br>
> feedback about those sorts of things. Little things like that can make a<br>
> big difference in final presentation and I've stared at this enough that<br>
> fresh eyes can catch things I miss or help make the decision easier one way<br>
> or the other. With that said I do see things now in the PDF view that<br>
> aren't obvious in the layout software so I'm making tweaks as I see things<br>
> too.<br>
><br>
> I'll be away from my computer a fair bit tomorrow with appointments but at<br>
> some point in the next 24 hours I'll sit down and do another pass looking at<br>
> text issues as well as a my first review of things like spacing between<br>
> frames based on the PDF view. This is definitely something for a<br>
> post-report analysis of how this experiment went.<br>
><br>
> Proofing copy 02 is attached.<br>
><br>
> On Tue, Apr 10, 2018 at 7:24 PM, Galen Charlton <<a href="mailto:gmc@equinoxinitiative.org">gmc@equinoxinitiative.org</a>><br>
> wrote:<br>
>><br>
>> Hi Rogan,<br>
>><br>
>> Here are my proofreading notes:<br>
>><br>
>><br>
>> <a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oA7q9S14E1Q57_FMGD0HcZu-SWsRMoXJ0aRkDHYa_H4/edit?usp=sharing" rel="noreferrer" target="_blank">https://docs.google.com/<wbr>document/d/1oA7q9S14E1Q57_<wbr>FMGD0HcZu-SWsRMoXJ0aRkDHYa_H4/<wbr>edit?usp=sharing</a><br>
>><br>
>> Regards,<br>
>><br>
>> Galen<br>
>><br>
>> On Tue, Apr 10, 2018 at 5:55 PM, Rogan Hamby <<a href="mailto:rogan.hamby@gmail.com">rogan.hamby@gmail.com</a>><br>
>> wrote:<br>
>> > It's here!<br>
>> ><br>
>> ><br>
>> > <a href="https://www.dropbox.com/s/lt8fkzjzgxiy1ng/Evergreen%20Annual%20Report%202017%20proofing%20copy%2001.pdf?dl=0" rel="noreferrer" target="_blank">https://www.dropbox.com/s/<wbr>lt8fkzjzgxiy1ng/Evergreen%<wbr>20Annual%20Report%202017%<wbr>20proofing%20copy%2001.pdf?dl=<wbr>0</a><br>
>> ><br>
>> > Here is the first of the copies for proof reading. Please note that it<br>
>> > has<br>
>> > only received the most superficial proofreading at this point as the<br>
>> > focus<br>
>> > has been on getting the major layout and content in place. So, please,<br>
>> > beat<br>
>> > it up. As we get feedback I'll add names of proofreaders to the credits<br>
>> > page. Also, if anyone knows the name of the logo designer for the 2017<br>
>> > conference logo I'd like to add it. I assume it was done as work for<br>
>> > hire<br>
>> > and all that but I still think it's good to acknowledge where we can.<br>
>> ><br>
>> > I didn't add a CC license since we didn't gather those permissions from<br>
>> > each<br>
>> > contributor (and some it might be hard to explain it to) but I did add a<br>
>> > statement on the back expressly giving permission to duplicate and<br>
>> > redistribute the report since everyone agreed to that by contributing<br>
>> > content.<br>
>> ><br>
>> > At this point some graphics and layout tweaks are still likely to happen<br>
>> > but<br>
>> > not major ones.<br>
>> ><br>
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>> ><br>
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>> ><br>
>><br>
>><br>
>><br>
>> --<br>
>> Galen Charlton<br>
>> Infrastructure and Added Services Manager<br>
>> Equinox Open Library Initiative<br>
>> phone: 1-877-OPEN-ILS (673-6457)<br>
>> email: gmc@equinoxInitiative.org<br>
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>> direct: +1 770-709-5581<br>
>> cell: +1 404-984-4366<br>
><br>
><br>
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--<br>
Galen Charlton<br>
Infrastructure and Added Services Manager<br>
Equinox Open Library Initiative<br>
phone: 1-877-OPEN-ILS (673-6457)<br>
email: gmc@equinoxInitiative.org<br>
web: <a href="https://equinoxInitiative.org" rel="noreferrer" target="_blank">https://equinoxInitiative.org</a><br>
direct: +1 770-709-5581<br>
cell: +1 404-984-4366<br>
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