[evergreen-outreach] proofing copy three

[Rogan Hamby]

fixed.

On Wed, Apr 11, 2018 at 3:35 PM, Garry Collum <
Garry.Collum at kentonlibrary.org> wrote:

> It's looking good.
>
>
> I found one error.
>
>
> P 11. Middle column.  The word Evergreen is cut-off.  "We started the
> process of migrating to Ein December 2012."
>
> Garry
>
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> *From:* evergreen-outreach <evergreen-outreach-bounces@
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> director at hagerstownlibrary.org>
> *Sent:* Wednesday, April 11, 2018 3:14 PM
> *To:* Rogan Hamby
> *Cc:* evergreen-outreach at list.evergreen-ils.org
> *Subject:* Re: [evergreen-outreach] proofing copy three
>
> My comments are as follows, and with deep recognition that you've been
> working a LOT and this makes me feel nit picky.
> 1.  There seem to be a lot of fonts.  I wouldn't say it's weirdness, but a
> lot.  Most notably, to my mind, are the two text areas on the last page.
> My eye expected them to be what seems to be the standard san serif font
> throughout, but it's not.
> 2.  The logo on the back page seems like it's a little close on the left
> hand side.
> 3.  On page 9, there are essentially 6 colors ranging from green-blue to
> fluorescent green.  That's a lot of green.  Grant, we're Evergreen.
> 4.  The headers on pages 7 & 8 are off.  The text seems too close to the
> horizontal edge.  On pg. 8, too close to the vertical edge.
> 5.  The Kentucky collage on pg. 6 is awesome.
> 6.  On the acknowledgements page, everyone else is a proofreader but I'm
> proofreading.
> 7.  On the center teal bar on the acknowledgements page, the white text is
> off vertical center.
>
> Enough nit picking for me.  I didn't notice any glaring grammatical or
> spelling errors.
>
> On Wed, Apr 11, 2018 at 2:54 PM, Rogan Hamby <rogan.hamby at gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
> OK, clearly I missed my self imposed deadline of 2 pm.  There was enough
> feedback that I couldn't get it all in plus the things I noticed.  But
> thanks to the wonders of modern technology and mobile hotspots on phones
> I've continued to plug away at it.
>
> All of this is relevant because with my laptop screen but without
> additional monitors so it's hard to jump between all the additional windows
> to track font changes and such but I _think_ I've gotten the fonts
> standardized.  Another pass will be needed.  If you still see font
> weirdness please don't hesitate to say something.  How Scribus handles
> fonts .... well, let's just say it's not intuitive.  I have unkind
> adjectives in mind but it is at least consistent so I can work around it
> even if it makes absolutely no sense why it's doing it in the first place.
> And I'm thinking the manual editing of the XML I did at the beginning may
> be needed again.  Anyway....
>
> I'm still finding some small layout tweaks.  You may notice them.  I
> haven't logged them as everyone else has been so kind to do.
>
> Uh..... I have a lot of thoughts but time is short and I don't remember
> most of them.  But I think all the changes are in.  I do however want to
> highlight something that has been driving me nuts and that Andrea
> mentioned: kerning.
>
> I think some of the text flows look ... not good.  Scribus does not have
> smart kerning like InDesign or Quark or ... other modern commercial
> software layout tools.  For the most part Scribus has been decent but when
> it fails it really fails.  We could just justify everything to both sides
> like a newspaper but that would look just as bad just different.  The thing
> about kerning is that it's time consuming to do manually and small text
> changes can make it all mute so I'm not going to tackle it until I feel
> sure text changes aren't incoming and even then I'm not sure I'll have time
> to really go through it all.
>
> That will be tomorrow.
>
>  Proofing copy 3 is attached.
>
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