[evergreen-outreach] December CotM - Jeff Klapes

[Andrea Buntz Neiman]

Thanks for that suggestion - I swapped the first two sentences with the
last two in that paragraph - what do you think now?

On Thu, Dec 19, 2019 at 3:24 PM Amy Terlaga <terlaga at biblio.org> wrote:

> Andrea--
>
> I  like it.   The only thing I would change is the placement of this line:
> NOBLE has participated in the Evergreen community since before their
> go-live in 2012.
>
> It's the lead in that second paragraph and I am really expecting, when I
> come to this line, to read more about Jeff and the things he's done, not
> NOBLE's contribution.   I would just work it in a little later somehow if
> you can without it being disjointed.
>
> Or not.   It's a small thing.   The line was just a little jarring to me.
>  Otherwise, it all reads great!
>
>
>
> On Thu, Dec 19, 2019 at 3:04 PM Andrea Buntz Neiman <
> abneiman at equinoxinitiative.org> wrote:
>
>> Hi all,
>>
>> Here's this month's CotM post for review - please send
>> comments/corrections to me by noon EST, tomorrow Friday 19th.
>>
>>
>> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZhXwik2gD61ukQZU3UYCHyVWDAM7PEboOQ_0zVlu7_k/edit?usp=sharing
>>
>> Happy Holidays all!
>>
>> ABN
>>
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