[OPEN-ILS-DOCUMENTATION] draft terms of reference

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On Thu, Aug 13, 2009 at 2:34 PM, web gurl <georgiawebgurl at gmail.com> wrote:

> Okay, I'll take you up on the Comment Away! LOL
>
> I think it sounds great except for a couple of small grammatical bits which
> are probably a matter of personal preference more than anything.
>
> Under Principles
>
> Operates with wide participation and open communication, plans for its
> long-term sustainability, and is responsive to community need
>
> Somehow this statement  seems a little unclear in terms of who or what
> 'its' is referencing. Of course, it could just be how I read it on first
> pass. ;-)
>
> Perhaps something like this (may not be the best choice):
> Operates with wide participation and open communication, plans for
> long-term sustainability of DIG, and is responsive to community need
>
> In the second statement
> Manages documentation via single-sourcing, a central repository, version
> control, and the use of broader standards and best practices. We use DocBook
> for text-based documents
>
> This sentence includes a second sentence which doesn't really follow the
> writing pattern of the other statements.
>
> Perhaps something like
>
> Manages documentation via single-sourcing, a central repository, version
> control, and the use of broader standards and best practices, utilizing the
> semantic language markup, DocBook, for text-based documents
>
> Just my thoughts after a first read.
> Great job overall and very clear.
> Robin Fay
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> On Wed, Aug 12, 2009 at 5:49 PM, Paul J. Weiss <paul at paulweiss.info>wrote:
>
>> Shannon and I now have a draft terms of reference to show you all. It is
>> at
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>> http://evergreen-ils.org/dokuwiki/doku.php?id=evergreen-docs:dig_terms_of_reference
>> ,
>> and includes a mission statement, scope, and principles. Comment away!
>> I'll also put this on the agenda for the next DIG meeting.
>>
>> Paul
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